| Chapter 1 of my 33 chapter novel... It still needs work, so I'd appreciate any suggestions and/or comments |
The Raikon Chronicles _Ch. 1_
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“He’s twisted and sadistic,” Chelsea sighed. “Personally, I wouldn’t trust Nate as far as I could throw him.” She glanced at Jacob, who was finally being attentive to a slave owner. “Still, he’s my brother. I can’t kill him, as strong as the urge may be. And it doesn’t help that I have every means to kill the bastard.”
Jacob laughed. “At least I’m not the only one.”
“I think everyone has wanted to kill him at some point. Honestly, it
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The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.5_Chapter 5The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.5_
Jake rolled his eyes as Nathaniel droned on, explaining the rules. In truth, they were restrictions that Jake would just blow off later. As a result, he paid little attention, catching only a few sentences. Few of the statements mattered to him.
Nathaniel glared at his slave, seeing that Jake was paying him no mind. He sighed angrily. “Slave! Pay attention! I gave you another chance to be able to continue through your miserable life without constant pain, so listen!”
“My name is Jake, not slave!&#
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The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.4_Chapter 4The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.4_
Jake sat quietly in the corner, he was quite obviously bored. A week after Lynda had come to the market, nothing particularly interesting had happened. Though he would never admit it, he was beginning to think he should have gone back with Lynda. Then he could have come back for his friends after getting money. However, he knew that they might have been gone when he got back. As it was, Kevin and Jamie had been already purchased. Thankfully, it had been by the same person.
Annie came up behind him. “It’s going to be
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The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.3_Chapter 3The Raikon Chronicles _Ch.3_
Four days later, the ship docked in a large trading town, whose name was known across the world. The city of Carcarus was where the largest trade market in the hemisphere could be found. Forty-seven pits, nine feet in the ground, were spread across the marketplace. Each held about one hundred captives waiting to be sold as slaves. The area was often called “Hell’s Marketplace”, due to the cruel sellers and terrible conditions.
As the captain exited to speak to one of the penholders, the slaves were rounded up from their makeshift prisons. Penholders were the men who watched over e
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and yes i will still kill you
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Deidara is mine. So you can just back off. If yu want him, oh well. Because your gunna have to go threw me. And trust me I will never let you win. <3
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I'm the hero!
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i had pancakes.....
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i had pancakes.....
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OMG THIS MEANS A LOT!! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I know my name, but not who I am.
If seeing is believing, I must be blind
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